When I rewrote book two, I had to narrow the number of storylines and remove sections to keep the length and focus under control. I did, however, leave references to events I’d written but no longer included. A good example of this is the Warmaster Thoryn. At the end of book one, Tempas makes a dire promise.
A single Warmaster, he vowed, making plans in his head. Just one to right the wrongs of the world…
In the revised version of book two, in chapter eleven, section two, you see mention of a Warmaster laying waste to Revyn’s main temple in Lumintor. That is Thoryn. So for something different, I thought I’d show some of this material in the blog, specifically how this character was introduced.
He stood atop a rocky outcropping, overlooking the battle below...Read More